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My paragraph about smoking

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بواسطة طالب متحمس (641 نقاط)  
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Hello everyone,

I wish to give your opinions about this paragraph and thanks.

I am against smoking because it causes lung cancer, conflicts within families, and loss of  money. First, people who used to smoke for a long time might have unhealthy problems such as difficulty of breathing, a weak body, and worse cancer lung. Moreover, it caused death at a young age; for instance, my neihbor used to smoke when he was in his twenties. Unfortunately, he passed away last year because of cancer in his fourty. Second, smoking caused many quarrels; espeacially, between members of a family, which many parents got furious when they saw their children smoke. One day, I saw a twenty-year -boy hitting his youthful brother; he had found him smoking. Ultimately, I am against smoking as it cost a lot of money. Many individuals lost their money by buying cigarettes, so they missed money on useless things rather than beneficial things that certainly will aid them, their families, and the whole society. Breifly, smoking is one of the obsessions that weakens the physical health, the mental and the mental health of the persons, and more than that the community structure.

Good luck 

من فضلك سجل دخولك أو قم بتسجيل حساب للإجابة على هذا السؤال

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بواسطة طالب متميز (1.7ألف نقاط)  
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Good for you broyes

بواسطة طالب متحمس (641 نقاط)  
Thanks
Good luck
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